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Caress a Carcass, a Kitty by ~xwereferretx:iconxwereferretx:





She sat, mewing to the moon-
Shrill voice echoing above the din
Of broad chested bullfrogs
Beside a rancid creek.

Here Kitty, Kitty.
Please pounce into loving arms.
Let me bathe you with the scent of concern.

She darts, on twisted paws,
Wary of a caged freedom,
And crouches behind olive shadows.

Let me pet your coat, Kitty.
Who tangled these fine fabrics?
Will you not mend your attire?

Let me see your eyes, Kitty.
Who gouged out your soul?
Why do you cry claret?
©2008-2009 ~xwereferretx
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Author's Comments

On an observation made on March 17th, 2008. Please critique.

I'm using this for the 23rd theme- Cat for the 100 themes challenge.

I give *100ThemesChallenge permission to put this in their gallery.

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:iconprimalinstincts:
Sounds kinda like Roz :giggle:
Very nice though ^^

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:iconinnocencedied2nite:
Very intreguing.... gives a striking mental image

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It does paint a slightly disturbing picture.
Also, it's excellent!
And I cannot think of anything negative.

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Ask me about barnacles, you won't regret it. (sometimes, it is what you've got, not just where you stick it.)
:iconxwereferretx:
Thank you very much.

interesting fact > > I came home from school and there was a dead kitten on my porch. yesterday, before I wrote this. Eerie.

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:iconxwereferretx:
Thanks for the comment!

what was the most impactful line for you?

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:iconxwereferretx:
I meant "after" I wrote this.

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:iconxwereferretx:
Thanks. You mean how you found her?

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:iconinnocencedied2nite:
The line "wary of a caged freedom." I know that feeling that it implies...

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Eyes are in the Beauty of the Beholder :crazy:
:rose::butterflytwo:

Aang:"You're insane, aren't you?"
Old Woman: "Thaaaat's Right!"
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i think that everyone once in a while feels like that.

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